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May 4, 2010
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:iconmariofdy:
just another landscape... as usually: watercolour and ink drawing
special dedication: for [link]
many thanx for premium membership.
something new, it's interesting: "Your Premium Membership permits you to participate in Critique"... let's try :)
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First off I'd like to say this is a fantastic painting. The way you've abstracted the subject matter is really fascinating. I like how bits of the structure are breaking away. The lines art is detailed without being too busy and gives the painting a nice flow. The muted color scheme gives the piece an interesting mood--both mysterious and a little sad to me.

The only thing I really don't like is the bright white spot that's nearly center of the image. I think it detracts from the composition a bit, because it's almost overpowering. I don't know if it's quite so significantly harsh in contrast in physical painting, or if the contrast is exaggerated thanks to the scan/photograph. I think if that white part was darkened just a little bit, so it's still lighter than most of the image but not so bright, it would work a lot better.
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awesome piece!
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